Introduction
The Great Pacific Garbage Patch - The PROBLEM!
The Great Pacific Garbage Patch is 3 times the size of France ( 6 times the size of NewZealand )
It is in between Hawaii and California.
The Great Pacific Patch ( The GPGP ) is like an island but it is made up of rubbish.
The GPGP was made in the 1950s but wasn’t found until 1993.
It was made of people littering and it was washed into the sea and then it was taken to the GPGP.
Paragraph 1: What is the GPGP?
The GPGP is a garbage patch with heaps of rubbish.
It is there because people keep on littering and the rubbish keeps on to the GPGP
It is bad because we have been littering for too many so please be careful!
The GPGP is killing all the animals and making them really sick!
They have to get to land and they will try and make them better.
If they can’t make them better they will die.
Ka rawe Yazmin! I like how you have give each of your paragraphs a title so we know what they are about. Remember when we start a new sentence that we don't need to start a new line, we only start new lines when we begin a new paragraph! Keep up the amazing work!
ReplyDeleteHi Yazmin , my name is Porsha and i go to mangouni school i'm 10 years old, I like that you put a pitcher of the animal at the end of your writing. but look back at the end of your writing and you fought to put a full stop
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