Thursday, 7 November 2019

Cinquain poem

Horses
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Horses
Horses gallop
They are super beautiful
Horses are the best pet ever
Horses
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Here is how you do this poem:
First, you need a title
Then, you need a subject
Then, you need to describe
Then, you need action
Then, you need feelings
Then, you need a conclusion


Here are the rules
1.  Only 5 lines
2.  Syllable pattern ( 2 4 6 8 2 )
3.  Can rhyme but doesn't have to
4.  Can have onomatopoeia in it but doesn't have to
5.   Can make a story but doesn't have to   




WALT: make a cinquain poem
We made a poem
It was challenging to get the ideas but also to get the syllables correct
I liked it because it was easy but you can make it into a story

10 comments:

  1. Kia ora Yazmin I like how you added all the rainbows. Maybe next time dont use the yellow colour because it is hard to see.

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  2. Hi Yazmin it's Harrison this looks great.How long did it take? maybe next time you could make the colours darker because there hard to read and see. From Harrison.

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  3. Hi Yazmin it's Quaid here. That's a really good horse poem its good. But
    maybe you should make the writing a bit darker because I can't really see the writing and it would make it look way better.
    From Quaid.

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  4. Hi Yazmin,its Kohen here i like your Cinquain poem about horses. Maybe next time you could change the colours because the yellow hurt my eyes.
    From Kohen.

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  6. Thanks for the comment Jacob, I tried to change the yellow but the blog post wouldn't let me change it.
    From yaz

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  7. hi yazmin its Jesse i really like these poems they are amazing yazmin you do good work

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  8. Hi Yaz,this is a really good poem about horses.this a great example of a cinquain poem.good work

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  9. Hi Yazmin! It's Pyper here from St Patrick's School in Greymouth. I really like what you have done! It sounds like to really love horses! Maybe next time you could change the color of the instructions so I could read it a bit better. Well done!
    Here is a link to my blog: https://stpatricksgmpyperm.blogspot.com/

    Blog ya later!!!

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  10. Hi Yazzy! It's Miro here! I love how you explained the instructions. It was very clear. Did you know that the phrase "They are super beautiful" has 7 syllables, not 6? Other than that, it is amazing! Thanks.😁😉

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Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.