Thursday, 16 May 2019

my story




















for writing, we are learning how to be real storytellers. Today we looked at obstacles and how it changes the image!

3 comments:

  1. Ka rawe Yazmin! I like how you have really thought about the different things that could have happened when you broke your arm. I wonder what the adventures of "Trip over arm" would be like? Would they trip a lot? Next time maybe you could explain how you saved the world in more detail.

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    1. hi miss farr,
      well they would be fun scary and exiting at the same time!
      well the would trip alot because they are called 'trip over arm'
      I will do it in more detial next time

      from yazmin

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  2. Ouch! Did you realy break your arm? In the summer holidays I also broke my arm. Did you have go into a ambulance? I hope you are okay.

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