Tuesday 30 June 2020

Show Don't Tell

Today we had to do show not tell. When we are telling someone a part of a speech it is boring! but when we show them they can see the picture in their head because of all the detail you have put in it. We had to show the reader on this slide what tell is compared to showing the reader.

2 comments:

  1. very awesome i love your work keep up the hard work from karere

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  2. Hi Yazmin
    I like what you wrote and how you describe your writing!
    maybe next time add some pictures.
    very nice good
    Kyvana from Ahipara school

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